Tuesday, March 3, 2020
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ReplyDeleteHello Mia, I'm from Kawakawa Primary School Room 5 I'm pretty sure you remember me tho :D. I enjoyed reading this poster did you apologise to your cousin?. I like how you organised your poem it looks pretty neat. Come Check out my blog at https://kpskaiar.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteKind Regards - Kaia
Hi Mia, I really enjoyed your poem... I can't believe you punched your cousin!
ReplyDeleteMy only feedback is to do with your publishing. Try to use backgrounds that relate to your writing. This one could have a punch background or something like that to enhance what you have written and draw your reader in. Otherwise, great work.
Hi Mia Im Shanaya from kawakawa primary school did you really puch your cousin in the face?! Just like whaea dana said next time you might want to add a background that represents your writing other that that I really like your poem.
ReplyDeleteYours truly
Shanaya
PS Come check out my blog https:https://kpsshanayas.blogspot.com/
Hey Mia its your minecraft friend Braxton. I really love your poem but I would never come to thinking that out of all people you would punch someone. I think that next time you should have a background,that can represent your poem.
ReplyDeleteBut everything else is fine and pretty cool.
When you have time come and check my blog out at https://kpsbraxtonleer.blogspot.com/ Later OWO
Hey Mia its me hirini i like how you have write a perfect poem but why would you punch your cousin your like the nicest person i know. Maybe you can work on putting a background in your writing thanks . check out my blog @ @http://kpshirinih.blogspot.com/ Bye
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