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Friday, February 9, 2018

I Am Poem

I Am Poem

I am Mia
I am artistic and fun
I wonder what my future will be like
I hear screams in a horror movie
I see my Uncle Floyd
I want a Laptop with a mouse
I am Mia


I pretend I have slime
I feel like someone is watching me every single move I do
I touch my pencils so I can draw
I worry about my dog Koda
I cry about if my uncle is ever going to come back to New Zealand
I am Mia

I understand what death wants from us (your soul)
I say I AM A PART OF LOGANG PAULERS
I dream about meeting Team 10
I try to win the “Try not to sing along challenge” but I fail because I love singing
I hope my dog Koda comes back

I am Mia

6 comments:

  1. hi mia its Sophie from St Patricks school I like how you set your I am poem out but mabe next time you could put some color

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  2. Hello Mia,
    really awesome poem, it really made you want to keep reading.
    even though I really loved your poem, maybe next time you try to make your poem rhyme.

    Kaylee, from St Patrick's school... If you were wondering?

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    1. Thanks for the comment and thanks for lending me your name
      😉

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  3. Hello Mia i really like it but maybe next time you could try and make it rhyme in some of the part of the poem but its was very amazing

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